[NukeNet] Suggested readability improvements

[theroyprocess at cox.net]

To: Nukenet,

A long time ago,
 before I got my first PC,
I asked a professional
Journalist, who made their
living writing, gave me.
some free advice,

There is 24 hours in the day!
Less is more! Write your points
in the first paragraph if you can.
If there is interest,. they might
read the whole article!

What interests most people?
Convenience, what is easy,
fast, effective for "who signs
your pay checks".

Why are PCs so hard?
Everything is a secret 
now a days!

Regards,
Dennis F Nester